Friday, 16 April 2010

Mr Superficial

Ok so my next blog wasn't supposed to be so soon or on this topic. However after getting consumed in this blog business something dawned on me. As much as I love females for their appearance i often overlook "The Content of their character" as MLK Jr said. The mind is a powerful tool which links our emotions and experiences and the depth of the blogs i have read has reminded me of this.

Appearance is the basis and foundation of relationships, and by relationships i mean any encounter that you experience with another person, whether it be relationships in business, with friends or with someone your attracted to.

So 1st impressions are everything, yet both male and females in their naivety ignore the 1st impressions of the other persons mentality. How they make you feel emotionally and not sexually. How your mind reacts to their presence and not your body. We all do it, even if not consciously and that is down to our genetic make up. But we shouldn't use it as an excuse.

This was just meant to be a quick blog which i have wrote a poem for. Its entitled "Mr Superficial".

Mr Superficial



Please may I offer you a sincere apology

For only concerning myself with the curves containing your anatomy and physiology, as they

Continue to take hold of my inner thoughts like a monopoly.

The flaws of my species down to God and biology.



Even when blinded by your outer beauty your intellect was evident

And if only all females thought like you, set the standard, were the precedent

I would make love to your ideas, slow dance with your intelligence

I love the way you think things through strip them down to their bare element.



Let me caress your every thought and make sweet music with your emotions

Hold hands with your desires, strip your conscious down to its bare minimums and massage your deep imagination with lotion

Marry your confidence as you give birth to the notion of romance, our thoughts intertwine we connect on the spiritual, Love. The only remedy, not taken from a potion



Got me feening for the contents of your personality

As our feelings ride in ecstasy making dreams a reality

Unlocking doors in your mentality with keys of liberty

Get straight down to the thought processing actions of foreplay forgetting all formalities



And even with what I know now in the garden I would still take your fruit

Because your inside shows strength in volumes, were other girls have theirs on mute

Therefore refusing to look with my eyes but listen as I am in pursuit of

A relationship that blossoms from your mind being the root



So again, I offer you my most sincere apology

Please let me embark on an intellectual monogamy

And if I ever fall, have patience, you know what’s wrong with me…

I’m Mr Superficial.


God Bless You Bloggers, Wherever you are.

2 comments:

  1. This is one of the most well thought out piece of poetry I have read. Normally when the concept is strong the words used weak but you killed it with this one ... I might have to print this out and put it on my wall!!

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